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*edit*
read the instructions!!


the ball only moves while your mouse is moving to allow you to move your lines in mid flight. it's not lag


also your score will increase everytime you click reset ball because your supposed to make the ball in the hole with as few trys as possible


your score reflects your total number of trys
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This is my first attempt at a game,


the collision detection sucks


tons of bugs


but it does work!


and I hope you have fun!!


see if you can get a better score than 13 :) a.k.a lower than 13

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fun game

could in my opinion be a little addicting game but there is jumbo shit load of bugs it almost looks like it lags but it dont anyway nice game for the first try keep it up

JBPresents responds:

Thanks for the great review!

Great concept, poorly executed

Make the instructions more clear about how to move the ball, make a button that you can hit, so you don't have to click on the small letters(little things like that can make the game very annoying) also, work on the collision detection, I'd love to see you make a Linear v2 with these additions made :)

JBPresents responds:

thank you very much for the advice i can't wait to start on a V2.0!

needs work

the ball was pretty slow and there were quite a few bugs. but it could possibly be a okay game, if these things are looked into. a solid 5/10 for a first attempt.

from josiah10,

JBPresents responds:

thank you for the review :)

umm yea

first thing is you is if u click the "reset ball" button u get points so get a score better than 13 wasn't hard and sometime the ball goes through the line
the game need alot of work

JBPresents responds:

it was supposed to be like golf were a low score is desired

ok...

jus fix the bugs den bring it bak and touch up da graphics if u can but good idea, it gud really go somewhere with the rite work

JBPresents responds:

thanks

Credits & Info

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Votes
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Score
2.93 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 4, 2008
2:05 PM EST