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Dont piss off/on a tree!

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This is my first animation, so I was trying to do motion tweening, frame by frame, and clips inside clips. Since this is my first flash grade fairly!

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Just needs a preloader

Other than that, great short! Hahaha the tree's face!

its good for a first-timer

i personally feel its a bit too short but simple which i like unlike those long crappy flash which deserves to be blammed to hell so i say its a commendable job for a first-timer but the drawing can be improved and the sound effect could be funnier =)

btw how u do a flash? must u dl something to make flash? i would like to try one XD

for first time

for a firat time it was pretty good
I like the pun
pretty funny
when you make your next flash remember to place a preloader in it and have plot to it
wish i knew howq to make flash:(

Keep it up!

EB626 responds:

Thanks, will do.

Haha

I really liked it. Nice establishing shot at the beginning to set it and then the funny comes. Quick, simple, and funny. Good stuff!

EB626 responds:

Thank you!

Good job on your first animation...

...I can see the works you have worked on.

Just a few things:

1. You don't have the "load and play". That is very important to any flash.
2. Your frame by frame was too slow. Very poorly thought out.
3. Your drawing was good, though the person (victim) was poorly drawn, and animated as he was "shoved" down the cliff.
4. The fonts (which I assume you wrote with the paintbrush" was unclear, and gave me a sense of yuckiness (not something you want, even if you were hinting about piss.)
5. Audio was good. Synced up the way it should be. Didn't like the audio for the pissing sound.

Overall: You are off to a good start. Just keep making flash projects, you'll get better as you go along. Keep up the hard work bro!

EB626 responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give me advice :). I will take this all into account for future projects.

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Uploaded
Feb 23, 2008
12:19 AM EST