Nice mix with live action and animation, but Bob did nothing and there needs to be more action...
Which one's Jacob?
Well, that was a bit weird. By 'VS.' I had a huge battle rotale in my head.
As the review said before me, most flash needs more than just a 'few hours'. Next time put a little more effort into it. I don't agree with what JoesCrabshak said about the loading screen, as it just annoyed me.
But fair enough for an attempt to tackle you own boredom; I know where you're coming from there.
The person is me/jacob.
if you don't like it,don't vote and write a review
Strange, thats what people normally need in their reviews...
It was an interesting application, but even on the part which seemed like you wanted to nail (such as the lightning) were obviously not done well enough.
-Sadly, thats about it.
-The sound was to loud and abnoxious
-You said "if you don't like it, don't vote and write a review on how it make it better" but thats what u need in all your movies. It seems as if your saying to your viewers, "Hey my movie isn't spectacular, but plz don't say it sucks."
-Believe it or not, but any GOOD flash application needs more than "a few hours"
- You should have had "Bob" at least moving away from your lightning or something, him standing them mimic'd the moving; "standing"
-It had no reason to be posted on newgrounds, no significance, and trufully nothing was accomplished within the course of this flash movie. Some flash movies work well this way, but they still have to be long enough to feel emersed, not a kid whose head u cannot see making lightning come out of his hands with no explanation of why this is happening...
Work on these, and this could become a decent movie.
Thanks for the great review!