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Forrrest: Squish

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Uploaded
Feb 7, 2008 | 1:23 PM EST

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Well here it is.
Probably the best flash i've ever made.
At the start I was working on a serious piece, like the Forrrest PREVIEW i submitted earlier.
But this came out :)

I will finish the original soon

CazmoV

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oveshovesh

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

i like the song

to bad u didnt continue with it

the graphics were sub par but it wasn't very bad u need some work but u know that i think i like the idea though of the things happening maybe u should make it that all the things are created and have a nice song in the background
i saw potential hope u carry on trying


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CatalystikaCatalystika

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

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A ladybug that has blood spraying out and, apparently, is as big as a human foot. Not good. Not good at all. No plot, no point, just no.



XQRLY7XQRLY7

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Needs improvement.

You showed some very good potential in this movie, however, it isn't high enough quality to validate me voting above a 3.

You've got a few good technical skills down, but the art was still bland and unimpressive.

Suggestions for improvement:

Multiple occurances-
If 2+ things occur at the same time, it's impressive. If your ladybug walked, and flowers sprung up behind her wherever she stepped, that would be cool.

Detail:
You used very basic animation, hardly high quality at all. Redo everything with more colors, more details, and finer lines. It doesn't matter if it's still ugly- at least it will be detailed.

Character Development:
Your ladybug was bland and boring. Animate her steps a little better to give her a personality. Then it's funnier when she gets squished.

Try it again with these steps, and see if you improve.


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CazmoV responds:

Thankyou ever so much for your review.
I always appreciate a long, constructive-criticism filled review.
I really will use these tips for a new submission.
Thanks again

CazmoV