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Today Was A Really Bad Day. Alot Of Stuff Happened. I Don't Know If It Was Bad Luck Or What.
ENJOY!
Don't Forget To Vote And Leave Comments/Reviews!
More To Come If Not Blammed. If Blammed, New Version Of This One!
Message Me If You Want To Do The Animating And Me Do The Voice Over/Writing Or What Ever.
Idk. i Think Partnering Up Would Be A Good Idea.
*Edit*
Due To The Shitty-ness Of This "Slideshow" Episode 2 Will Show More Detail, Movement And Promise. It Will Be My Duty To Sit At A Computer For Hours And Make 'Dear Diary" A Fucking Milestone For My Life.
Thanx To All Who Critisized Me. None Of Your Words Hurt. They All Helped Build What Episodes 2 - ? Will Be.
Thanx.
eh it is ok
well eh keep at it
bleeding-spaz responds:
okay
Not enough substantial
You have a story to tell, that's it. But this is meant to be a flash animation... It would have been much better with moving mouths, moving characters, not some kind of a slide show.
bleeding-spaz responds:
Slideshow Was Kinda What I was Going For. But Episode Two Will Be Alot Different. Same Characters, Same Title, Different Style. Thanx For The Constructive Critisism.
Well.
This has potential.
Just animate. Buy a decent microphone, because nothing is more irritating than crappy voice-acting.
Add a replay button. You never know.
Keep up the good work!
bleeding-spaz responds:
There Was A Flaw, If You Were to Play It OVer Again And Wait Till The End. Right Click Then Press Forward. It Will Take You Too A Scene i Should HAve Taken OutWith A Replay Button.
Brill mate!
Better than last 1 cos it's longer obviously. I don't see why this should get blammed, the humour's much better. Obviously, improve on graphics. Take a lot more time over it, you using flash yeah?
bleeding-spaz responds:
I'm Using Flash, I'm Was Just Rushing And In A Hurry, But Now, Animation And Penicls. Episode Two Not Coming Soon. Instead, I Will Work On It.
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