wow

it was quite short... it should've been longer.. to be honest i've written poems longer than this and were put in the internet and every comment was a good one... if i knew how to put my poems in the art work like you do, I would do it, but no i just use this to add my favorite games. try harder. unless you are a person with no possible way to express your feelings, cause this is pretty simple, any one could have written that.

Truly

You need to study some more of poems metric; it can come to be a good one. Keep righting. For the animation....0 we should make some thing in flash not power point! Got it

nice

very nice

Not bad or good.

I think you put more time on the pic then the poem.
I was not happy with this so if you like a good joke view my user page.

For a poem..

The poem was written well.

Pros - Good dialogue
Cons - Dialogue is all you will get here.