nice but a little plottless
liked the animation and the subject but the plot could be much better it was a little strange but satisfactury that he didn't jump at the end just for a pidgeon.
that was nice:)
Author Comments
no this isnt one of my best animations it has no story or that good of animation this was just practice for my drawing skills i need to learn to draw people better so thats all this is but i hope you like it any ways
* edit* hmm i watched it and there arent any audio problems this time but its still not that great to me o well hope you like it
Jestercap13 responds:
lol, this one pretty old was more or less just practice, defenently plottless though i made it up as i went lol
Well animated
It was well put together, to say the least. But the quality of your artwork was all over the place. It looked as if several people with several different levels of talent drew this. Work on getting your artwork consistent, and you could contribute some outstanding videos in the future! 3/5 5/10
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah i know i jump around alot i didnt know if this should be practice or a real flash so it ended up all over but thanx 4 watching
Here is what I thought.
Ok... I really liked the artwork in this flash... Although it did seem to have some half-assed parts in it... But I liked the whole flash all round.. and gernerously voted a 4/5. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff in the future!
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx yhea as i have said this was just practice so its not a real animation
strange
you no this flah isnt all that bad but it is in no way good either you need somekind of plot or why should i care if he kills himself
Jestercap13 responds:
eh this is just to practice drawing i still cant animate to well so my next one will be better
Uhm...
Nice graphics, bad animation