Good work!
Nice smooth stop-frame animation and silly character...
Jon
Author Comments
Ok I was rejected again (/wrists and ;_; and T_T) from the wonderful Green and White collab(http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/41733 9) so yeah! Also the song is just Main Offender by the Hives backwards.
McZero responds:
Thanks
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Well, I like the idea of green and white. It's not much of an idea, but it's still something different.
^^Needs Improving^^
No offense, but I can see why this got rejected. This movie is a bunch of FBF animation, none of which were too interesting or well animated. Also, did you pick the music? Because it just sounds very strange to me.
Though it's good that you are trying to get involved in the Flash community. Keep at it, and you'll get better.
McZero responds:
I CANT BELIEVE THIS, ONCE I THANKED YOU NOW I DETEST YOU.
Sorry, but no
Some advices are to get a better music (or at least to make this one without the noise that it had), and you can also make it much more faster and it won't be a bad idea if you add some more to it (especially after adding some speed to the scene)
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McZero responds:
Sorry man, Thanks
Interesting
To be honest I didn't really like it. Usually I like random type submissions but this was, to put it bluntly, ugly.
Your graphics were, simply, just crudely drawn. And the tweening wasn't that great either. I know that it was for a line collab, but you can do alot with a line & you only used the medium to it's lowest potential. Also on another note, I don't know if you chose it, but the colour green you used contrasted with the white was quite hard to follow.
The sound aswell wasn't great strange and distorted. Not nice on the ears at all.
Overall needs alot of improvement, but still there's quite alot of potential here.
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McZero responds:
It was fbf, it was my 2nd EVER flash/
Needs Work
The music to start with didn't sound the best of quality, it kind of sounded like you recorded it from a player to your PC, try to have the music file on your PC and import it to flash as oppose to recording it, also the music cut short of the end of the flash, which wasn't too good, should have lasted the whole length.
The animation, well parts of it where okay but other parts seem to be rough or badly drawn, you need to put a little more time into them. The idea was pretty random to, it didn't really seem to have any direction. The length I can understand the kind of shortness to it because it was part of a collab originally, still you could have edited this version a little.
1/5
<3
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McZero responds:
Sorry, Yeah I know I SUCK ;_;