Very Good

Interesting and flows well, although the progress bar makes you think about how much longer it is, and if you are using this flash in a presentation scenario then you may want to remove it.

nope...

not bad at all

interesting

a very educational video about grains and heredity. i'm impressed. its not that interesting i mean its not an action flick you have to admit. but you hardly find educational stuff on newgrounds. so, i find this pretty good.

Very well done

It's not bad at all. I see how, people could take this and just be like, "Ok, Sunny you have me presentation, good boy good boy" It happens to me all the time, and then they ask why people are just lazy and just use Power Point. Cause there are no Kudos anyways.

More Than I Ever Wanted To Know...

...about the genetic mapping of grain.

Very dull, yes, but extremely competent work and useful as a teaching tool. It was fairly dry, but I managed to see it through to the end. While a casual viewer would pass this by (in a hurry), students or whomever the target audience may be would surely prefer this over a series of graphs and dull lecture.

Suggestion: some sound effects. Music may or may not work for you here, but adding a few simple sound effects would really help this presentation. That's the only major criticism.

Nice job.