A quick tribute to those men we're proud to call the true heroes.
Make sure you don't miss the clock tank!
POST-REVIEW POST:
Thanks guys, I'll have you know, I am the worst flash artist to pass through this site, but when i found the raw materials page, I just wanted to make something sweet out of it. So I'll agree, it's not so great.
Honestly if you want to see what I do, check my SMAYA: Wombat Episode 1 or w/e I titled it.
Some sweet stuff there, because 3D anims are my thing.
It looks cool
It looks really cool I liked it..... but I feel like it has a beginning but not an end...you know...cause it has that first screen at the beginning(that goes away really fast) and then the tank and that's it... Let me know if I can help you with some music and FX... it really has potential.
Nope
Tank one lasted to long so that i didn't stay till clock tank.
Add some next buttons and backround music.
meh
its not bad, its not good, it just is. You could add some music and maybe some more pages to it.
uhhh
i dont really understand the point of this...maybe its just my compy but it didnt really do anything after "i good"
Worth Expanding
After the "Good" page you should have put a "bad" or "evil" page with the villans of newgrounds. Aslo add music and thunder in the background.
Thanks,
Vince