well

As often as I try to pick positives from your work I just couldn't manage to with this. I create shorts myself so I wasn't expecting a 10 minute cartoon but you couldn't even manage to inject one laugh into 30 seconds of flash?

I never try to get personal but your story reminds me of something an 11 year old would write not a 31 year old man.

all in all animation was poor, bsckgrounds are over used (seen the same one in all of your submissions) and you lack any form of comedy.

sorry to be so negative.

That's it!

This movie has it all - what more could I want?

Very Nice

This plot is very nice. I like it. Good job! Just please improve graphics.

Very very interesting...Because

For one i never knew what the hell those things were, and you included to things from my child hood A wah wah tube and the n64, simple but i got a good laugh out of it and it didnt look crappy so all in all its good other then the fact that its shorter then a midgets baby?