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Eef Oof's Arrival

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This is my first movie. I hope all that watching my brother make famous movies paid off. Sorry if it takes to long to load, but it is my first movie and i think I overdid it.


This was just a test to see how good I was at flash, program wise, not drawing, as you can see.

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You got somehting there

Well, i think the flash programming side of the animation needs some work, coz when i checked the load on my cpu while watching the movie i was like WHOA. I think you've got a pretty good idea of how you wan't your movies to look, but you lack in experiance at drawing and animating. This is exelent as for a first movie, but you still need to practice a lot more.

Lose the CPU-straining logo

Your semi-simple movie takes up a lot of space and I believe that little "Rock Hard Chicken" logo is to blame:

1. The pencil drawing animation slowed down my 1500 MHz comp the first time.

2. The "Remix" song is of very high quality and could take up a lot as well.

So I wouldn't recomend using the logo for your other works.

As for the movie itself; it was somwhat well drawn (about as good as I can do), congratulations, but didn't make much sense to me. Also I don't how this is an introduction because I haven't seen you formally introduce yourself as other Clocks do.

So just fix those up and your score will improve.

4

You need a working preloader/play button/replay button. In that order.

I was expecting something more, you know, it was over 2,000k! Sheesh. So anyway, I am giving a 4, because of the lentgh. I think you can do a lot better, in fact I know so, just look at "A Thing Called Love..." The graphics were ok, but you do need more substance. Your production logo took more time than the whole movie!

Ryan

Gay

This thing sure is gay!

Well

Ididnt like it much at all i thought it was really badlyt drawn and i think that the sound was really gay and who does that eef oof guy think he is???

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2.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 3, 2002
5:44 PM EST