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Possary-Episode 2

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This took a week to make(yeah).

I think it's better than the first episode.

If you have anything to tell me, say it nicely. I don't like to be screamed at. Also tell me how I could improve.


Hmm, some improvements

First, maybe you should include some incentive as to what's going on. My fault probably for not seeing the first episode, but I was pretty confused as to what the heck was going on.

Second, you know those rainbow colored rays or punches or whatever they were? I wouldn't use the rainbow color anymore. The color just looks terribly sloppy in every Flash movie I've seen it used in.

Third, maybe cut down on the angle zoom/changes. I saw what you were trying to do there but I'm sure a lot of people are gonna be stumped as to what's going on when the screen starts flying around.

It really wasn't bad, you really seem to have some talent. Hopefully you can fix these bugs up in the next movie, or even better, a non-sprite movie.

LarrytheShlarp responds:

Okay, I can explain. Larry got possessed by Boos because Boos hate Planet Shlarp and they decided to possess the protector of Planet Shlarp, so he could destroy it.

And yes, the next episode is coming nicely so far.

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Oct 23, 2007
6:02 PM EDT
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