nice

good job i lked it...BUT WHY THE HELL DID U PUT A GUY RANDOMLY FLYING THROUGH THE FREAKING SKY...but thats the funny part i guess.but do u know where i can get flash PERIOD.hehehehe srry i had to put that and sorry if i offeneded u

wow

good for a first timer and i like the pikachu bot.....and i also agree with king yuza

Slow, but...

Though it was slow, I thought it was a little funny, but it was good for a first timer. Things to improve on (yay for bandwagons!): We don't need to see gray lines behind someone who's flying. If they're in the sky, we know they're flying.

Try to improve on layering.

Right..

Right, so you're probably a beginner at flash, you still have a long way to go. Well the main problems are the drawing itself and framerate. Those growing yellow things arent really expressing what they're supposed to be. They need to animate much faster if that's a lightning or an attack, or whatever. And if you're not keen on effects, that's ok, you can still animate greatly if you catch the wave. Anyway, storyline's on the other side of this thing, I can't give you a good score for this.

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Things to improve on: the framerate. It was a joke! At first I thought my PC was lagging again. That is all.