Very good flash.
The build up of suspens was excxellent....but you need to diliver a bit more on the climax. I was a little let down because I felt you could have done a better job of delivering the climax of when the killer struck.
The only other critice I have is in agreance with fuckin-me, the colors did not match the theme. they were to bright for a suspense killer thriller.
that was actually a very creative intro to what seems like it could b a good series.
I liked the idea and the animation style was original, but the only turn off was that it was short. I look forward to more, keep it up.
lol the wave rides in
well not bad but it needs some work I think you have some good things ahead of you please at least try to take some time reading the submissions maybe try not to rush so hard if you did
Hmm, I swear I tried, but couldn't understand what you meant....read the submissions?
If you feel like it, explain it better on a PM!
that was cool
yeah i'll be honest i really only watched that because i'm from colorado, but it's really a good place for a killer story cause we have some wierd ass people here, lol, yeah it was really good, it kinda seemed like the style of animation didnt really fit the dark theme though, it just seemed to bright and sort of cartoony and it took away from the film a little bit for me, but still it was really good
and i just wanted to say we have a beaujos (the pizza place in colorado springs) in fort collins too, they have tommy knockers though, good shit
You meant Idaho Springs, right? 'Cause they don't have BeauJo's in Colorado Springs. Also, I don't drink beer, so I've never been to Tommyknockers, but my friends said it's pretty good.
And yeah, Colorado is perfect for this story, it's a creepy place with weird people wrapped up with the cries of scary crows!
Was short, but good
was just short, but it was nice, goodjob, but needs more length