About that..

Pretty good if it had more of a theme and was better i'd give you more stars

great!

I liked it alot! i had a trial once too, but i sucked at it : P . tell you the truth, it's better than ALOT of the crap out there! You picked good music, you spelled well, and you also made somthing RPG related (sry my opinion : ) .)

Not bad man...

Not bad man, with a bit of help you couyld make it better and its me Nanous of SXG site

Nice start

Improve on this:
Work on the graphics, no one wants to watch a thing with stick people.
I don't like the click on the arrow interface. It's reather annoying.
Why not add voices?
Work on the humor.
And it says "I didn't submit this to newgrounds" at the end. Fix it?

hey !!!

its not working !!!