very good

for fucks sake im 15 and i wouldn't have been able to make a single loop of the preloader. ignore those trolls there are 3 types of people on internet and from most important to least important they are
1) the attempters (people like you who have to start somewhere and are tragically the victims of trolls)
2) anti-trolls (people like Xarnor and i who hate trolls and all they stand for)
3) the trolls (people who have extreme personal issues, can never gain confidence to talk to a girl and take it out on #1)

ps i know you're 15 now and i look forward to seeing future submissions

That must of taken some time :)

Very creative, I see its your first? if its not then Im sorry, thats pretty good, better than my first one :L mine looked like the matrix lol

Good Work!

Its a great idea and something that would work really well if you made it a bit faster and made it longer. still good though!

not bad

i thought it was very creative. i think if you keep doing this you will become very good at it. good job man.

heh

I can't say, that Your drawings are exteremely good, but You put effort into it, and it's all that counts to me.

Good work!