try making the animation smoother. No offence.
I sense promise...
You have great sculpting ability, but lack the ability to apply it.
I sincerely hope you continue to improve your efforts.
As far as claymation goes, that was good. It flowed nicely. In your next tries, I hope to see maybe a plot or something. I think that might help.
your pretty good at claymation. you should try to make a short with a plot next time though. id like to see what you can come up with.
Lacks originality or a sense of purpose. Try again.