cool
smooth but the vocals are kinda off, maybe its my comp, anywho 5/5..
Author Comments
The first part to Tales of Ron. I added sub-titles to help understand what is being said.
Original
I think Newgrounds could use some originality so this is pretty cool. Just practice a bit more.
slow and painful
The voice acting and graphics need work for the story to come across properly. It was dragging a bit with the amount of pauses etc so a bit more action and maybe some back ground music would pick that up
CometFIVE responds:
Yeah there was music on that part but it was too loud so I took it out. I learned how to not let that happen, so in the future i'll add music for the diaolouge heavy parts.
Reminded me of Mario
A mustached man with a hammer and a green lizard like villain?
Sebcon sounds like Sub-con from Super Mario Bros. 2
CometFIVE responds:
Yeah, I started this idea back in 2003, when I was in middle school. Ron had a striped hat too. So maybe it was subconscious. I bet the mustache really reminded you of Mario, hehe.
good
pretty good, the only thing i can say about this is, BETTER QUALITY.
CometFIVE responds:
lol. Sure thing.