It was a good beginning
It was pretty good. The only problem was the text speed. You need to either slow down the text or add some voiceovers for each character that's talking. I prefer the voiceover to make it much easier and better for the flash. Oh I almost forgot that one title thing in the middle of the flash. I was about to close the flash thinking it was a to be continued right there but then it continued the fight sence again. Don't do that. It confused me and must of confused anyone who was watching it. I hope episode 2 will be a lot better. Good flash, and good series. Just needs improvement.