A short animation about a boy who brags way too much, and "brag" he landed.
That's... it? Props for amazingly smooth animation and beautiful sceneries/character design, but the plot leaves a bit to desired. A cool ending would've been if he just started training like a manic, until finally, ONE DAY, he did jump across the river! And all the friends be like fo shnizzle. Just an idea. Keep it going!
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cool one
that was a pretty cool animation. a little bit random overall, but it was quite funny... i have no idea why he wa bragging like that, but it still was amusing and the ending was pretty nice.
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Yeah... The drawing was good, but seriously is there a point to this? Maybe, if you made a little more than 10 seconds, added a bit of story, and made it actually funny... Still, the animation was smooth and the drawing was good :)
3/5 Keep it up.
Decent,not enof comedy, or build up
I thought art wise it was okay, but there was not much comedy to it to make it that short. It had no real rise or fall to it. The voice acting just didn't fit to well with it. Overall a nice animation but to short with almost no comedy to it.
I know. I'm just not good at hitting punch lines.... lol
But I'm gonna keep it that way. I either have no time to edit it again, or personally I just want to consider it as another exercise.
Thank you for all the comments, good or bad. i would take all these constructively.
Hmmm...
A little bit too short and generic, I think. The graphics were good and the sound was too, I just feel it could have been a lot longer, ie; before jumping straight into the failing part, having the boy brag to his mates about all the things he's supposedly done before and stuff, and then after he falls in the river, have him completely humiliated at school or in his neighbourhood or something. But yeah, good graphics, nice attention to detail. Good job overall :)