Good music

Now this one came out with some decent music, I would suggest step away from the gradients and go with more of your own details and shades, I know I have said that before but it will look much better, also make these longer, or bunch them up in one flash or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was notbad and gave off a few laughs but the onlything is it ended too short and the whole toon was over before it started, So instead of just one short piece, you can add other short toons, so that its not such a waste and besides that would bring in alot more quality to your work, and you can showcase more of your work besides just the one. And more efforts on shades and details.

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Amazing

This is the best video ever

very good one.

it was good, and fluid, but needs to be longer. other than that, its good!

mmmm, yeah

its ok iwene ur making ur next submision make sure to make it longer lenth was realy the only problem with this! but ignoring the lenth its good i like it pretty stylish nice one

Ok

I think you could have given us some more in this flash. Overall I think it was a nice idea and you did ok. Nice colours.