dude...

ok dude i know it is a good flash but it however i see it its like stolen of a japanese cartoon.(tsubasa).ok

Potential...

soo the first flash of alot of series arnt works of art and magical wonders its all about improvement you have a good idea here it seems but i do suggest working on you art some more people love detail and detail gets views pay attention to detail also as you progress your series try not to lose the jist of what the character looks like while adding in detail example : you give your character horns when he didnt have any at first some people might like what the character looked like before and youd lose viewers doing that anyways good luck

Ehm..

Well its kind of boring..

Interesting...

It seems like it has a bit of potential, with some more work you could make it into a pretty cool game or series. Two problems I noticed :
1. While loading the movie, the loading bar is too small to fit the loading percentage.
2. The music just cuts off at the end of the movie, which sounds kind of bad.

Recuerda: / Remember:

Aquí el idioma mayoritario es el inglés, así que adapta todo tu trabajo a ese idioma, porque si no puede que esto no pase. Además, si haces una cruza de series famosas sin aporte propio, debes imitar la calidad de los dibujos, así te aseguras los votos.
The majority of people here speaks english, so you have to adapt your work to this language. If not, this could be blammed. Also, if you make a crossover of famous series without own addition, you have to imitate the drawing quality so that you ensure good votes!