Needs a bit of work
Not bad. The background to the scenes had a good number of components but the graphics need work. Its not too long and it has its funny points. It had a decent plot and the animation wasn't half bad. you may want to practice making fire a bit better, although the glass breaking animation was above par.
not bad? lol, this is terrible i made it in an hour
thanks for the complements =]
everyone else hated it
Ok but limited
Its not great but its all right. Its mildly funny all through. It could do with an actual punchline, but yeah I suppose.
I had to play it again to read the sublim message.
If you could think of some slightly more punchy humour beyond the basic "This is all obvious" situation you could make a silly little series out of it.
hey stupid, u left a bad review for some guy's first flash, which was better than a lot of what u make, this is your like 15th flash, and this kid has already outdone u.
I guess I shouldn't be leaving u a bad review, since none of my stuff made it through the portal, but you're in a crew, and thus get 5's from fellow crew members, I don't.
Actually we only get 5's form fellow crew members if we tell them on the page and im only a clockfreind so that doesnt even happen for me
clocks are lame
clocks are lame plus 1
ur lame + 1
Poorly animated and i couldn't understand a word he said i hate those clocks!
i made it in an hour, why do you think my other stuff like urbia is better?