Ytown Public 2

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This is the second episode of Ytown Public. In the first episode Newton Nerd jumped out if the window and died. Now he's back! How?! Why?!

Find out now in this exciting episode of YTOWN PUBLIC!



Nice. It gets interresting. The animation was quite good. The sound quality however was horrid. Get a better mike and maybe some software to edit it. For 3D flash use Swift 3D 1.0. Its quite easy to learn. Won't take you more than a day or so, and all you need to do is import 3ds models into it, which you can download of the net for free. Lookin forward for the next episode!

McRhyme responds:

Wow! Thanks man. I really wanted to know that. And the mic, I don't know why the sound sucks - I've an entire music studio connected with my computer. Well I guess I suck at talking. I'm just a silly Swede.

like the plot i guess...

well it was a pretty good movie, but all take out the good parts about it and tell you what you could work on.

well i personally think it would be neat to go 3d sometime in there. thats just me. but about that sound, that nerd guy has the most annoying voice!! and i think you could take out your little commentary here and there. it doesn't add much effect. i'm sure the next one will be great. have fun with flash!

McRhyme responds:

Oh I would love to add some cool 3D effects, but I don't have a clue how to do it. I use FLASH 5, will I need an extra file or something? Anyone knows how to do 3D? I take it you don't draw all the lines by hand. That would suck (I have tried that).

Ok, now I'll logg out and continue with the next episode (bursing with new inspiration).

good effort

I liked the caracter info, it was a nice touch but there are other parts to clean up. When you are recording the voices dont hold the mic so close to your mouth otherwise it becomes muffled. Dont get me wrong I liked it and I liked your intro and the music but just work with the sound and script a little bit. One more thing (I really dont want to sound too critical or put you down, just trying to offer advice.) please change the Nerdy dudes voice, its really squeaky and kinda painful. otherwise a great cartoon,I look forward to see three, because after you smooth a few things out this could be a good series.
PS Check out the soon to come IGNIS KING flash movie.

McRhyme responds:

Glad toy liked the character info shit. It was pretty easy to make so I will add one in all comming episodes. It will make it easier for people to understand what's going on and you get to do something while waiting for the load. I will work on my mic holding technique. My sister does the Nerd's voice she will be crushed :( I personally think it adds to the nerds character that he has an annoying voice! Hehe...

*Fast reviewZ*

Hot shit! This one was nice but do damn confusing. The animation is smoother than ever. You should still put more action to it though. I like the walking brain cell. You've got one of the best graphics I've ever seen.I'll try to e-mail you a bunch of ideas soon if you'd like

McRhyme responds:

Hehe... that was confusing? Watch it again. That might help, but I can't promise anything :)

More action, check! The next episode will include more action, I promise!

Hey, I would REALLY like to get that email. It will probably help me to get more things right in the following episode. Haha!

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3.60 / 5.00

Nov 27, 2001
9:39 AM EST
Comedy - Original
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