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Everything's Perfect

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Jordan is having the perfect day, until....

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poor guy

his wife is such a slut!

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Well although it was alittle predictable that something bad was going to happen to ruin his day you still made me enjoy this flash as the story unfolded because of some great voice acting, the main guys voice was awesome and i really believed the crying at the end. The animation wasn't that good but your graphics were well drawn, i especially liked your backgrounds. Overall this was a good watch.

~H-J~

True story, you having a good day and Baam!

The backgrounds aren't too bad. Colur choice was great also. The animation needs a lot of sharpening up. You have a nice story about a horrible fact of life these days. Keep working you might want to put in some joints next time lol.

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, I thought this was pretty good. Your character had a funny personality to him, just the way his life was going and the way he reacted. The surprise at the ending was rather sad, but it was entertaining nonetheless.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations were a little poor, like walking.

Nice video but the ending

It's sad to make great efforts for everything and then be deceived, it feels disgraceful even if you are the best at all!
Good work for the message!

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Views
5,060
Votes
21
Score
3.46 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 15, 2007
3:49 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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Format
video
flash