I liked this because I thought that invisible joke at the beginning was great. This looks like it was animated by Parks2. You know, the guy who did the "College University" series? Either way, it's quite fun. Why didn't anyone catch him before? It seemed like he really was invisible.
He probably just couldn't read. That music never gets old. Tasers are always funny. That guy is really a jerk if he did all that stuff. He deserved to be arrested.
wat a rip off lol good work funny
HAHA Stupid Guy.
Man, that guy got pwned...
I liked it alot, definately in a higher tier than most flash animations. I especially loved the ending. The animation was very good, just an inkling away from professional. However the story could have been done a bit better in my personal opinion. Have you thought of perhaps finding a partner to help you write scripts?
This was one of my first attempts at a cartoon. Now, I do get people to read my scripts and give me feedback so I can make revisions before I get to audio recording.
Never really thought about a writing partner. Maybe it's something to consider.