I'm sorry.

I must be pretty stupid, because I didn't understand the story/metaphor here. I even rewatched it twice, but I don't see how "birth" relates to Humpty Dumpty breaking in two and some little black thing jumping up into the clouds to become a bird. The bird could be a stork, I guess, and the black thing could be a sperm, but I still don't understand.

On to more technical aspects, I liked the animation of Humpty Dumpty getting ready for the dive - rubbing his hands, etc. The character animation on the whole was pretty good, though I didn't understand why one audience member was rubbing another's head. The choice of music was good.

Err, that's it.

K

^^Good Points^^
That wasn't too bad. I liked the graphics. Nice black and white effects with this, and also some good animations. The whole movie was rather interesting to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending didn't really make much sense to me at all. Also, I think it was kind of short and didn't really satisfy me in that time period.

Good Effort!

Hey this was well drawn and animated, I liked what you've done here. A little short though! Keep it up!

ha it was funny

and thats not just the pot talking.

PS i gave lower score on graphics because i dont like black & white =/

then again, it did sorta add to 'quote' MOOD 'end quote' of the movie...o well, why bother scrolling up the page and changing the score, so ill just type it, if i had to rescore the graphics, I'd say a 6.45-7 yah, that sounds about right! =D

nice work man!

High Quality...thats all i can say

Odd ending....actually whole movie was odd...but that didn't matter. The animation and sound effects were top notch. I hope you make more in the future and maybe next time a little longer.