Never heard of the Atom Association before but the flash was pretty damn funny especially the mexican dance.
When I see this submission I see a little kid spending twenty minutes on a flash. Now I am not saying thats a bad thing, it just really lacked any flavour or substance or anything of real value. It did not entertain me in the least bit and the flashing lights turned me off completely. Not a good submission by any means.
You had something to build up on. No one had though of the Mexican party idea out of every person who made a Pico day tribute.
Unfortunately it was a short film with not much of a story going and unclear text-to-speech voices. Graphics weren't extremely elaborate, but they would've still looked good if they had been given more life rather than simply being tweened.
The music was likeable, so that's something you could've worked around had you decided to make your film even just a slight bit longer.
If you're ever going to make an improvement on this film, make the party scene be seen. That would've made everyone's day.
I JUST DONT LIKE THEM
I WAS WALKING DOWN THE STREET AND I SAW A WETBACK.
I SCREAM GO BACK TO MEXICAN AND HE SAID IM JUST TRYING TO BE AN AMERICAN CITIZEN LIKE YOU. I SAY FUCK YOU AND GO SWIM BACK OVER THE RIVER TO MEXICO! HE LOOKS DOWN, AND I SAY YEA JUST THEY WAY I LIKE IT, YOU POOR MEXICAN'T. GO CROSS THE BORDER!!
AM I RASICT???
IM NOT A KKK. I JUST HATE MEXICAN .!!
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The graphics you had were pretty nice. Good definition in your characters and also some nice shading effects in here. The sound quality was high, and the Mexican party at the end was rather unexpected and comical.
Not really the most interesting storyline. It doesn't seem like you put a whole lot of imagination into making the script. Really the only part that wasn't completely boring was the end.
Stop reviewing movies so much.