Liked

Well the one problem i found with this was the shortness of it, i mean i liked how creative it was but it was all over too fast for my liking. The style you chose could have been your down fall, as you don't see many black and white flash shorts with no color in them at all very often but it has worked to your advantage. The character design was simple but for some reason i was able to take a liking to it quickly so well done. The sound in the background topped this off nicely.

~H-J~

I really like the 'rough' style of it

Well done Charlie, another great flash. I really like the roughness of this one. The music is funny and the plot (if it can be called that) is also funny.