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Yeah :D yeahasdasd

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If you actually made this in a couple of hours,

then I'll bump your score up to a 6.

Idk if you did though. For the letters, actually try tracing or the text tool? Don't draw letters. I can barely read them.

K

^^Good Points^^
This was pretty nice graphically. You had some cool FBF animations and overall cool effect with the graphics. Characters looked nice, and looks like you spent some time on this. I liked the voice acting and the sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just an intro, which was disappointing, and it looped, which is always annoying. I would like to see a full version with this same care taken to make it.

Nice!

It was going good until about the fifth time through when all the songs where crossing over at once. I got to about eight or nine when i just coulnd't here a thing.

Alright.

I protected it because I really like it, but I'd much rather see a version of it with a preloader and a play button so it doesn't loop. But other than that, this flash was awsome. Good job.

Not bad.

A bit short but what can you expect from 5 hours work. Nice graphics and style. Hook it up with a preloader and a play button and we have ourselves a very nice piece of flash.

Credits & Info

Views
1,504
Votes
7
Score
3.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 2, 2007
10:24 AM EDT