Fine.

The graphics, entertainment value, and compression are what you need to be improving on. Because the this really bored me, no offense.

i look forward to ep 2

i like it so far. the animation is ok. i like the music choices and the way u make it like a goomba version of mario world. keep it up.

was a pretty good flash

heres some pointers if u want em

- try and create more than one angle to the character,
- for later flashes, try to make the sound be streamed, (try to find a tutorial for that)
- graphics are wat people look for, so make sure you have a bit of detail in the graphics part of it
-try to cut the audio files to the length they are needed in the cartoon, with a audio program

pretty much thats really what you should try to do, it was a good flash, hope ya get better at animating, and get some awesome cartoons made.

Worht the effort

I found it interesting enough to watch it all the way through. Overall, it was worth the watch. Animations were dull, most of it was maybe motion tweens. You got the fighting scenes right though. Add voices, better animations, and a nice storyline and I'll vote 5 next time. It was worth the effort, so I gave it a 4.

What was that thing???

um, i dont mean to like knock on your movie, but it made very little sense to me...penguins & a black cloud... that original or is that from mario too? The only advice i can give is maybe you should have used sprites instead for what you were going for, less you are honestly looking to create an actual series thats all you.