random and...
quite fun. when i read the description i thought it would be blam material but it wasn't :)
smooth animation and total randomness... plus it was kinda relaxed and not allinyourface like most randoms do.
fun stuff.
hope this passes.
Author Comments
warning: filled with nothing but random retarded crap.
took me almost a week (i scrapped it and started over about 6 times) but it is FINALLY done.
theres an easter egg.
its a sucky easter egg but i dont really care cause easter eggs are never very rewarding.
umm... its kinda short cause i turned down a lot of my own jokes because i didnt think that they would be thought of as funny as much as vulgar or inappropriate.
storeboughtarmy responds:
thanks :D
wha ?
well the art looked good...that's all though.
storeboughtarmy responds:
thanks... i guess.
Try again
A few suggestions:
Fix it so that there's not a big black box in the middle of the screen throughout the entire cartoon or make the toon the right size so that the box actually forms a border, if that's what you're trying to do.
Don't use your crappy computer microphone. The sound is horrible.
Make it longer, and put more detail into things.
storeboughtarmy responds:
yeah im sorry bout the size bein all weird but this is my first awkward sized animation on newgrounds.
deviantart resizes it for you, newgrounds doesnt.
im actually using the mic on my webcam. im only 15, i cant afford a better mic.
its short because i only have a limited amount of jokes and i cant use all of them in one animation.
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