Great first go
Looks great for a first submission. Looking forward to more!
Author Comments
Learn your Safety Tips in five easy steps... Or laugh at the stupidity!
5/07/07
-Made a few changes. Hope the file size didn't get too big.
This one is my first to be submitted on Newgrounds. (Yeah, I know...) There are more on other sites, but I was eagar to get one here. Hopefully, I'll be able to animate as well as some of the gifted individuals here.
Yah!!!!
You really need a manlier voice... (no offense) It's just critisism is all. I really liked the one with black mage!
Fifen
Nice overall, hope you make more from the future.
Also, if you have a feminine voice, feel free to tailor the character to it, we won't hate you for it. Or were you going for THE red mage, as opposed to A red mage?
ArtysCafe responds:
Yeah, the voice is kinda bad. It's mine... (And I hate it) Actually, it was just A Red Mage. He's just a bit girly.
Lol
Convertion normal everyday things into a flash (while making sense) are always the funniest
Funny
heh,that was good, i found it simple and original, the fourth tip was my favourite.
a detail i found is that the framerate is low, you can increase it according the movie, a smooth movement would look better.
ArtysCafe responds:
It was on the default frame rate of 12, but thank you for telling me about it.
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- Jan 24, 2007
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