hmm...
The music itself , as in the lyrics was ok. It was a ok flash but maybe some points to improve on:
. Graphix wherent that great, not bad but not great
. Song hurts my ears you could have improved on that maybe a bit more tempo in it
The story itself was kinda funny and sad at the same time. I was going aaaaaa when he was in the sun and laught with the experimenting kids. It wasnt bad but realy some points to improve on. Keep on working to improve