good moral
a good moral to all kids teen's and even adults don't smoke i am only 12 and i'm telling adults what to do? weird anyway good animation nice and smooth characters and good relaxing music good work
Author Comments
This first Blopland movie about smoking and its harms was made for an annual animation competition for students all over Singapore. It's a little rushed but I made it in two months. Forgive me: my studies were in my way.
The actual competition entry resides here but I felt it was a tiny bit incomplete so I added that to the Alphas section. After over a year, the stolen Alpha has been removed thanks to mighty Tom, and the complete (well I only added like 30 seconds to it) animation is here. It may not be that good but I did my best.
Visit http://www.AniMania.com.sg for information on the competition.
n00b-l0s3r responds:
Well, this is but just one person's effort. Hopefully it helps.
I made this in 2005 when I was 13, so just barely over your age. So trust me, you're not the only young one around telling adults what to do :)
I'm so glad you finally submitted!
I'm so happy it finally got submitted and admitted through! This better server that cheeky bastard some revenge for stealing your movie... freakin' jerk. I know how upset you were after that
Anyways, great job ;) I enjoyed every bit, including the extra 20 or so seconds, it was cool
Congratz on the movie, and keep workin!
n00b-l0s3r responds:
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smoke
i didnt quite get the point of this movie and i almost didnt watch it till the end. it was just boring. what was it? a tragic story or just a telling off? graphics where ok but.... i dont think that throwing a cigarette to the floor will set the entire bank on fire plus its not allowed to smoke in such buildings... or the thing with the smoke in the mayors house... what ever... there surely are ppl who fall doze off on their couches while smoking but i think its their problem... whatever.. somehow i forgot my thoughts :S...
ps: im against smokers too, but that cartoon was just too flat
n00b-l0s3r responds:
Lol, k. Thank.
K
^^Good Points^^
The movie displays a good moral, that smoking is bad, which I agree on. Anyway, I like how you had a lot going on in this movie aside from the main character, which was neat. Seems like a regular day when you do that. The animations were pretty cool, definitely the best part of this graphically.
^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was the short loop you had. It played the whole time which was annoying, and even worse, it was pretty low quality. Also, the storyline just seems to drag on too long. You need to get to the point much quicker. I'll admit I didn't watch the whole thing because I was pretty bored.
n00b-l0s3r responds:
Thank ye. Your criticism will be taken into much consideration. And I didn't know such simple animation would give this so much bonuses XD
It's OK if you didn't watch it all. At least you watched it :D
uhm right
to be honest, the animations were quite nice, even as the sound but the content is just to surreal. none of the things that are bad in this movie actually happen. Especially not when you smoke 1 cigarette.
n00b-l0s3r responds:
Yeah. I'll be more realistic next time.
Sorry about the content. But I'm glad you gave my animation a good mark :)