Here's where all those cinematic aspirations hiding just below the surface of the last episode come out in full.
The animation in this one is a good deal better than in the previous one. I especially like the backgrounds. They're bare, but that's the point. It sells the idea that this is an undermanned outpost in a desolate universe. The way their eyes move is really weird though.
The voice acting is corny and the accents are very over-the-top, but I find it fun. It somehow manages to sell the general as a somewhat believable character. If you allow yourself to be immersed, the strange accentuation almost seems to be an in-universe way of disguising his own low hopes. The characters are all very clear archetypes, but there seems to be a subtle depth to them implied by their interactions. This is the case when Beecher refuses to let the general have the book at first. Etrius, however, seems kinda boring. A retired one-man-army, brought in for one last job, reluctant to cooperate, snarky and disillusioned. There just isn't any hint of depth to him like with the (admittedly over-the-top) general. I guess the thing inside him will provide some depth in the future episodes. I can't quite remember what happens next.
The world-building is decent. It is an info dump but it's justified and spiced up by enough conviction to be fun. The flashbacks could have been shorter. The ones for episode 1 were nice as they gave the author a chance to re-do the animation from that episode (and the dragon does look awesome), but I feel the ones for episode 2 were too long, although they also had some awesome animation.
Overall, visually this is top-notch except for the close-ups, particularly the eyes. There are some issues with the pacing, but ultimately it's a good set-up for future plot developments.