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Plastic Death

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i made this after i got sent home from school.... its not that bad.... at least i dont think so

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Not bad

Good job on the effects and motion but the flash itself was too short, put some more time into it and maybe make a plot and actual voices. Good job.

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it wasn't bad at all, but you have to polish it up more, make it a little more than it is now. It's just screens and some sounds. Make a background music, better action; now they're just popping up and shooting one at a time. The idea is good, but you didn't work it out good enough to get nice scores.

wow!

how did you do that? with the toy soldiers standing up and all? that was one of the coolest things ive ever seen!!

Good start

I think that you could do much more with this. For instance, there should be more of a plot to this particular piece. I also somewhat thought that the camera moved too fast, and so I didn't know which of the toy soldiers I should have cared about, if any. Otherwise, this was a great work, hope to see you add more to it.

Interesting.

Add a vauge sembelance of a plot and you might have something on your hands my freind. Nice work with the camera.

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5,475
Faves:
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Votes
13
Score
2.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 29, 2006
12:48 AM EST