unwatchable

Text is annoying as it is and should only be used as a last resort if your microphone is broken , not just if you're too lazy to buy or borrow one, but on top of that, to force your audience to read that text through a circle is absolutely excruciating, and makes it completely unwatchable, I tried to sit through it I really did, but if you don't have enough respect for your audience to make a decent flash, you can't expect people to sit through it, on top of that this is supposed to be a trailer but the movie never came out, oh well, maybe that was for the best. Not trying to be mean here or anything, just giving an honest opinion.

Eh? Is that all this is?

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

It was just some text then a guy you drew standing, nothing else. It was just completely pointless and this trailer didn't give you any sort of feeling for what the actual movie would have been like. When this started you had a scroll and you showed a small section of it bit by bit and on each line it swapped so it went in the other direction, which amde it impossible to read, and when it finally did show up on the scroll completely, it vanished almost as soon as it appeared making it impossible to read unless you paused it. the text was still hard to make out even when paused though as the contrasting colours played with your eyes. If you were going to make a trailer you should have at least had something happening in it, this was absolutely nothing.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

your trailer lag on my comp ; )

the only thing i've seen in your trailer wuz xoz production and xoz episode 1 trailer . thats not even a trailer in a trailer your suppose to see the scene not the credits

((( HUH )))

HUH well ok trailers are tacky in my opinion, but anyways, this one didnt even show much of what the real movies would be, infact this is your only movie, so im thinking the real version didnt even work out, hehe dont tell us how to vote sounds so much like a clock, hehe ohwell...

~X~

Cool!

I can't wait for the full movie, you rock, man!