Well..
That fell rather short of decent.
Make it have a point.
And please, put some real humor in the flash instead of the pitiful attempts at jokes.
This is a little experiment taking my comic into the flash world. Done it a few hours all told it's just bringing the same stuff to the table as our comic. Which I'd totally link here but I'm having some troubles with the site at the moment.
Well..
That fell rather short of decent.
Make it have a point.
And please, put some real humor in the flash instead of the pitiful attempts at jokes.
There was a point. Link on a spinner!
As for the jokes, there were no jokes in my drama.