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Random Weekend Project#1

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Hi! After over a year, this is my 2nd submission to Newgrounds. Long story short, I was pretty bored this weekend and just decided to put something together. I started on Friday and ended on Sunday. I showed it to my friends, and one of them said it was really good and told me to put it on Newgrounds. And so I did. Not sure how well it will do here, so I think this is like an experiment for me.

I'm not sure what the story is. But I hope you get as confused watching it, as I was making it. Enjoy!

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I don't believe it, that was actually good!

There was nothing missing from this flash simply amazing !!!!

Very simple BUT fun at that

This piece was very simple yet very fun and artistic in a way. I liked...again Simple, possibly made from being bored but very fun in a way. Good job =)

Creative!

I've always been a fan of the Baby Elephant Walk. Anway, I think this was a very artistic and just wanted to say that I enjoyed it. Keep it up!

~Tovi~

Simple, somewhat interesting

The music was ok, though it's a common song, using something different would have really added to the piece. The graphics were ok. It's a good job for a starter, but I'd get some more prctice in before making another submission.

ques and not

+++ Cool music.

+++ Some nicely drawn vectors/shapes. In particular, I liked the car (specially when shown larger at the end), the birds, sea, lobster thing...

---- The shape-tweening sections (man to fire, that kinda stuff) looked horrible).

- When you got the car to follow the path, you should've tried to get the path to be around the line, so the wheels would be on the line rather than the centre of the car.

---------- Starts automatically. Seriously, don't do that. Have a play/replay button.

--- The thick brush 'shapes' in the boxes, with the default gradients doesn't look too good. Solid colours or custom gradients could've been much better.

+++ Constant change.

++ cool wee thing in bottom-left.

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Kept me amused. Some simple techniques and nothing too fancy, but put it all together and it made me smile.

I'll dock a point for the auto-start though.

baomon responds:

Thanks for the review. I'll keep in mind the point about the auto-start for next time.

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3,496
Votes
9
Score
2.45 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 13, 2006
7:05 AM EST