great job

great job man that movie was awesome. graphics were great but it was kinda hard to understand you. great movie, it was pretty deep. 5/5

That one thing...

The animation was amazing, some of the best I've seen, so smooth and bold and everything was clear and distinct. The style was also great, you made a bery good point come out and the music matched the scenes to a T.

The thing that really let the movie down was the vocals, they were never loud enough. I understand you were going for the faint eerie impression but they were never clear enough to be played at that level. I also understand in the production process to you it might have sounded fine because you knew the script, but to another viewer I found the words difficult to hear and distinguish.

Other than the vocals, this would have been an amazing piece of work, if anything I suggest you re-track the vocals and polish it off, even if not re-submitted to newgrounds, it really deserves it.

Wierdness^2

I'm confused here, what was the point of this piece? Good art, good sound, seemed intersting, but some of the scenes are so random that they distract from the main story. At least, I think that's what confused me. I don't know. Not bad, but needs more direction.

Nice work

Overall a good effort.

I'm not sure why the person before me could not see it, but it worked fine for me.

5/5

i saw nothing

what was that?....all i heard was music...nothing on screen after pressing the play button...please...for Godsake...make something that people can see...not just hear.