Hmmm....
The breast bounce was nice. I hope you make more of that. And more nude skin please.
About the rest: Well, I don´t think it´s a good way to critize other work in a way like that. I don´t think Jerry Jacksons cartoons are bad and I respect his style. But about the "I can draw anime" you were absolutely right. That is so fucking noob to draw anime. Well I see I gave you a 9 in overall. Because of that stump on the all anime lover heads I give you a 10 in overall. Well done!