Yopu could have made this ALOT better, i mean ALOT
the character art SUKED. it had no story, and it loooked REAL 2d.
Yopu could have made this ALOT better, i mean ALOT
the character art SUKED. it had no story, and it loooked REAL 2d.
Uh...
Although I get you're setting up for some action presumably later on, all you had were shots of a ninja monkey walking and not very clearly and looking inside a room and the monkey looking very flat indeed. And it abruptly stopped!
Good
But it was kinda slow, too short, and lacked action. Still it IS "To be continued", I hope ya work on it.
Some parts appear lazy...
I like some of the detail in parts of it, but I dissapproved of the simplicity in the Ninja Monkey's movement. His legs just had two positions, I mean come on. Another thing is that when he is walking, he walks in front of a background that just repeats itself, you can see a light blue line in the same spots as he is "walking", but I wouldn't worry too much about that. Mainly, I would suggest putting alittle more movement and animation into his legs while he is moving. Other than that, good work...
It's a monkey
wow....ninja monkeys....how original
nobody has ever done something like this before
with all due respect...you should go back to the drawing board and try something like....ninja.....pineapples
it would be more funny than a monkey.........
but the music was catchy
that's it really.....just keep on trucking man and keep trying
peace