Wow..
This is like a slap in the face to Shakespeare's great piece of work. You have defiled the great name of Romeo and Juliet.
Author Comments
This was a project for school I made 6 months ago. Beats my why I waited this long to submit it.
I had to compress a bunch of work into four days, so I had to cut many corners, as I'm sure you'll notice.
Hope you like it nevertheless.
EDIT: It would seem as if the movie freezes before going into the credits. This is fixed now.
Ha ha!
I lolled when it went onto stick figures for the fight scene. That was good! I also thought you did the dialogue quite humorously, and the way the king jumped ontop of the rock from nowhere :D
The graphics were alright, the animation was a bit sloppy for the first part though. I didn't much like the silhoettes thingy but oh well; you had to do this quickly.
You get a good grade for this?
meh
I wished you did a better job making old english into modern english. Its a nice try but you got sloppy at the end. You could do alot more to make this better
It was ok....
Work on a better plot and it'll be better. Other than that it was fair. Great audio btw!
Meh(s)
Not bad, but not incredible. Artwork was oooookaay. You really should not have used stick figures in the end. And somehow...the modernized text just didn't work out the way I hoped. No, I totally appreciate your effort there, but it just didn't have the same ring as the old stuff. It was true to the script, but just without the pizaz or whatever.
I dunno, but I think it is rather awkward to draw people walking towards the screen. To the side works about as well, and it is easier to visualize. *shrug*
Keep it up either way.
pyro786 responds:
Thanks for the helpful review.
I wouldn't have used sticks, but i ran out of time, and I would have never finished if I had used fullbody. Part of the project was translating the old text into modern language, but I agree, it lacks the punch. It did seem sort of funny at the time though.
I think the walking towards the screen would have been okay if they hadn't stayed there for so long.