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Jeff & Chris Ep 0

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This is the beginning of My webcomic series Starring me Chris, Blaze, Devan and John

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Welcome to the future people.

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So...Where is John anyways?

Rad responds:

Thanks Chris, hell if I know he's crazy!

Hey jeff nice job

hey u still spelled my name wrong its devon just to let u know...
any ways we need to get ready for our next idea

Rad responds:

Thanks man I've got nothing to work on right now so tell me when your ready.

Just a suggestion.

You could probably work a little bit on backgrounds to make them look a little less thrown together and lazy, because it is a little too lazy. The mouths could be a little synched instead of a movie clip for everyone.

Other than that, I liked your style and the characters.

Rad responds:

Thanks alot for your review, and I know that the backgrounds arn't the best, Thats why i'm using photoshop next time!

it was really good

it was good the graphics werent super great but they were good enough for me there were some funny parts and that cannon kicked some hard ass nice job

Rad responds:

I'm going to keep working on getting better, Thanks!

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Uploaded
Oct 18, 2006
11:05 PM EDT
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flash