Lots and lots of potential
Wow, for a short, that wasn't actually half bad.
Graphics: I was very impressed here. You said you worked a week on this, and it's pretty high quality. Most of your animation is clean and appealing. You should make a little more motion in the scene where he gets the oranges, I thought he was masturbating, it was hard to tell.
Style: This has the makings of a series, or an even longer comic. I can seriously see this being a very successful series, like some of the mario series' we see out there. I like how you pay attention to making the humor light and incidental instead of forcing jokes into the picture. It's a difficult thing to put into an animation, and few people have a talent for it.
Sound: You had pretty good voice acting, and my only complaint is that when you were doing the orange thing I couldn't tell what he was moving around by just using noises as references. Otherwise, great job.
Violence: Eh... I gave you a two because obviously they got slapped on their way out :P
Interactivity: You offered links and other things besides just a start button, and your menu looked good.
Humor: It was very short, and delivered a really funny finish. If you follow this trend, I can see how you can keep that theme going for at least another four or five animations.
Overall: I gave you a ten because for one, I like giving tens. And for two, I thought you did a really good job with this short. I don't know the characters, as there seems to be two links, but I very quickly got a "feel" for what they were like. And that's a difficult thing to do in animation without making it suck.
Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Lol a lot of people thought he was wacking off :P Oh well O_O, I think it can be a series, too someday who knows? :D Did you notice the quality togglers and movie controls? I loved how they turned out :D Thanks for the great review buddy :D
LOL!!! nice whoises
"OH SHIT" "THAT WAS AWSOME" LOL
i guess they're just 2 lil' pervs, eh? ehehhe
i was lmao so hard i could't breathe
when the boob fell it and i can't rember his name went oh shit and when they got tossed he said that was awsome!