School shootings never looked so good!

Excellent look and style, very appropriate for the mood of the story. That scratchy handwriting really expresses anxiety and primal emotion.

My only complaint is with the writing, as the concept of school shootings is a bit overused these days... I heard on CNN there's been 25 already this school year alone. It was a very generic school shooting too, without any real character development or interaction except the bare minimum. It's understandable as this is your first work, but building a deeper storyline to really show the character's pain and get more sympathy from the audience would make your work some of the best.

not bad

it was original as in how you did it with paper, i thought that was pretty cool, but the storyline was totally emo and depressing. Try making something happier, by the way how long did this take you to make?

Huh...

It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great either. The main thing that makes this flash stand out is that it is done in paper, which I have only seen once before (but it was done better).

The story was too emo for me to like it, and the sounds sucked.

hey roddy poo

i voted zero because you can't read any of the subtitles and the voices were horrible, sorry... its a five minute fix though. other wise it was good, emo but good.

Roddy-Poo

I love you!! Nice, I'll work on the site later.