Notbad on the characters, but the voices could use some re-working, it was abit scratchy, and it had some
random image moments which was silly, but overall i thought it was ok, but can be improved
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better quality of voices could be used
Another silly flash
despite some inside jokes that only you would understand, its ok.
This Has Potential
The file size is too big for what you have. The fat sound files are killing you so drop the quality on 'em a bit. When recording voices, back up off the microphone because the sound is getting distorted. Your mouth should be at least one fist width from the mic. Next time, write a script that's paced better. The humour is definitely there, but the timing's off. I know this all seems negative, but it's obvious that you have talent and I'd like to see you do better. The green skull t-shirt guy is HILARIOUS for the simple fact that he can't act and sounds like he's reading! You have to have him in more episodes! Keep 'em comin'!
a little lbig
but was hilariously brilliant
i like the part where the kid is gay. do another one where the kid is gay.