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Woot! my seventh up here! That's lucky you know. Anyways, I did this one quite a while and then didn't submit it for some reason. This one's pretty cool, its sketchy and smooth at the same time! Tis 1954 frames long, runs at 20 frames per second, and is about a minute and half. Hope you like it, and please, do review.

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K

^^Good Points^^
Another very neat movie from you. The first thing I would like to mention is that you had everything made out of sketchy animated MC's, and without that, this would be really quite boring. I thought the music was pretty good, and this developed more of a storyline than your other movie's I've watched. The ending was pretty ironic too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I guess you want to keep things simple, but plain green background=boring.

MorrowDays responds:

hehe, do you begin all your reviews with 'K'? kinda off topic. anyways, glad you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about the sketchyness holding it together. I tried watching it without it it, and ya, it was a little dull. Of course, after you've watched anything over and over while testing it, anything will seem dull. The reason I used a plain green background (but it was a cool shade of green nonetheless) was because other stuff would work fine, except when you get to the part where he drops the 500 pound weight from a different place. Because of that, I decided to stick with a simple, one color background, and I thought olive green worked the best. So that is why the background was green.

Not bad

Style is great.
Good job.

MorrowDays responds:

Glad you liked it

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad kinda neat music that seemed to flow well with the very smooth animtion, and the "ART" was very unique aswell, it all seemed to just flow together very well which was neat, i enjoyed it, hope to see more like it soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some different colors like with the backround, would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation aswell as some nice artwork...

~X~

MorrowDays responds:

Thanks! I love these GOOD BAD OVERAll reviews. They're very helpful.

It was alright.

I liked the plot, just, the scratchy animation method hurt my eyes. Other than that. Keep it up.

MorrowDays responds:

Glad you enjoyed it. The sketchy stuff is not for everyone, but I'm glad you liked it anyway.

not bad...

but... maybe try a new animation method

MorrowDays responds:

thats kinda what I was doing with this one, but.. okay

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Score
4.18 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 25, 2006
4:09 PM EDT